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I.

it seems a million years ago,
and we seemed so very young—
        that first spring of love
        when we rediscovered ourselves
                through another.

and when it ended i was broken,
but i still cling to those few shards of memory:
        sometimes,
        when i need a smile,
                i think of you,

and there is no pain in that.


II.

sometimes i wonder:
who are you now,
        this stranger that i once knew.
        i need no telling of the past,
                but of the present,

i know nothing.
sometimes,
        i think it might be better this way—
        there is something gilded about
                those memories;

they have a magic that we lack now.


III.

the summer air will pass me by,
and perhaps you will be there
        to catch it with me;
        but even without you,
                i would not miss these blue skies

for the world.
feel that peace, feel that joy:
        i wish for nothing but some
        mutual happiness,
                some common ground to steady us

when the fall winds blow again.
©2008-2009 ~SadisticIceCream
:iconsadisticicecream:

Author's Comments

Kind of old and completely bleeding irrelevant right now, but I decided to fix it up and get it out of my mind. Wanted to submit all my old writing before, hopefully, I have a flood of new inspiration from my creative writing class. :D

For ~ElectroBaby's yearlong contest, as a September entry (whoa I'm on time :o).

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:iconoleem:
You just broke rule 4 of the contest :bucktooth: I won't tell if you don't.

Otherwise, I think you described everything well. Good luck.
:iconsadisticicecream:
OHTHENOES. :noes:

Thanks, though. ^^;

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She dreamt in grey. :rose:
:iconlivingcomforteagle:
it's lovely :) very poetic, very smooth. good luck in the contest!

--
dark pictures, thrones, the stones that pilgrims kiss,
poems that take a thousand years to die;
but ape the immortality of this
red label on a little butterfly.
-vladimir nabokov
:iconsadisticicecream:
Thank you! I'm glad you think so. :aww:

And thanks for the fav. :D

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She dreamt in grey. :rose:
:iconelectrobaby:
I think you captured a great feeling for September :D

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A Contest A Year In The Making. Click here for details [link] and get in on the year round fun!
:iconsadisticicecream:
Thank you! :D

And thanks for the fav. :aww:

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She dreamt in grey. :rose:
:iconfallenidle:
I can't think of anyone who can't relate to this. A stunningly beautiful display of emotion. Well done!

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If she has to tell the story,
She tells it slowly

- ~AnUrbanNomad, "And They Didn't Sleep..."
:iconsadisticicecream:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so. :aww:

And thanks for the fav as well. :D

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She dreamt in grey. :rose:

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